This is just completely wank. It's your typical cliche story. Art is also trash :) Hopefully, the author doesn't delete my review, I'm just being honest and giving my own opinion on this story One of the biggest problems I have is the mc. MC personality takes a complete 180 turn and he becomes cocky and confident as hell (In like 1 or 2 chapters). This story gave him no character development at all. And for those who would defend this story, I bet you're the type to read stories with an overpowered mc, terrible plot, and think everything the mc does is right. He was a nice guy who went ways to buy his girl a phone. Next thing you know, he changes. Like bro, wtf? I would say the pacing of this story is an eh, and treating violence with violence is not the answer dawg.
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Liked it!
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