Review Detail of RJMidnight in The Mask Town

Interesting premise, I like the song in the beginning, I enjoyed the dialogue, you are good on the details to paint a picture, and I really love the fairytale feeling of the story. There are grammar mistakes that are easily fixable. In the first few chapters I read, I did not see anything dealing with the tags game-elements nor LitRPG; maybe that comes in later? But it did have a feel of folktales mixed with fairytales. Other than those things, I love your pacing and plot, keep up the good work!