Review Detail of Zedom in Loki: God of Tricksters

The first chapters were good, it seemed that it was going in a good direction. The writing quality was good, the story progression was good, the character development was good, in general it was pretty well done. But then for some reason the quality started dropping... I kept going because it was still a bit enjoyable, but then the last straw came... The system. There's nothing wrong with a system, I like and read stories with systems, what's wrong is that first, it was completely unnecessary, and second, the execution was done beyond terribly. After that the quality drops even more and it's so random and confusing that I can no longer take it so I have to give it up.