Review Detail of SolrakRK in Only Another History

Well, this is my first novel, I ask you to be patient, English is not my first language, and I still have difficulty in relating the thoughts of the characters, with the lines, mixing first person, with third person, and alternating between points of view . In relation to the story, at first, I will try to put the characters similar to anime for a better visualization and immersion in the story. I'm still in doubt if I put R-18 or if I put it in a different book with only the lemon R-18 scenes. Plot, don't even want to imagine what I want to put in this world. but, whoever played or watched AC Valhalla, has a facility to see what the "normal" people are like ... And of course I will give myself 5 stars, after all how does someone speak badly about themselves ??? Do not feel offended, after all, there are many chapters ahead, and I will try to be frequent. Thank you to those who have been following me, and do not forget to comment at the end of each chapter, after all I need to know what to improve.