Very interesting story line, just the interpretation a bit not clear with some words and selling. .but I'm able to fit in my own words to flow with the story. Good job by the way.
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Thank you so much, I'm trying to make it as grammatically correct as I can in the time I have so I apologise for any errors I made in editing it