Review Detail of LostThe50_50 in Another Life as Older Brother

.....to be honest.....this is a perfect example of....a harem gone bad.........when the girls were few....the plot was moving and there was still minimal relationship development.....it was minimal but there was development nonetheless.......now...........it's literally just focusing on how easy it is to bull**** the MC,.....to push him around...... My score for this before was.....3.6 which wasnt bad........but then......the events just started spiralling down....inconsistent mc, messy storyline.......not to mention the grammar got worse?(i dont know if anyones even noticed)........... Yeah...this is where i leave....was a good read while it lasted. Good luck with the novel, and hope you make it succeed.