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Iiiik
IiiikLv44yr
2020-04-26 20:00

I love this story, the writing quality is good and the character is progressing at a good pace and isn't OP and neither is she stupid or arrogant. A very good original novel would highly recommend to anyone who is looking for a book with a strong female lead.

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Eliza_3754
Eliza_3754Lv15

Just want to pick up that gelatinous ball of rice and cuddle.

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CailinMatthews
CailinMatthewsLv12

I hate how I think of more to say AFTER I submitted a review. *smh* Really, Cai. Really? *smh more* As a more in depth review, I'd like to point out how the writer depicts Ye Jiao's journey so well. Not only does she focus on her advancement as an Eon Energy Master but she also writes about her journey in companionship. The story itself embodies different elements in the MC's life and how it impacts her along the way. The balance among these elements are superb. The writing of them also impacts readers effectively. Whether a reader is a loner or an extrovert, he/she will find herself able to relate to Ye Jiao and the other characters. The cast is pact with personalities. No one is complacent or unimportant. They all contribute to the story beautifully—these includes the antagonists (although they seem easy to hate tbh) but if there's anything I learned in the writer's first novel, "Flowers Bloom From Battlefield," is that the younger ones have more chance to grow and redeem themselves. Most of their attitude comes with upbringing. I hope this is tackled later on in the story more when they could decide for themselves rather on relying on others' opinion. The flow of the journey seem to start out slow but the advantage of it is easing readers into the world the story has. The MC is merely a child at the beginning, a phase were she herself is discovering her own world. Her adventure leads her to a number of places and I have no doubt she'll travel more, letting us deeper into the setting. The road ahead of Ye Jiao is still long and I can't wait to be there every step of the way. Only more adventures and milestones awaits!

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