Review Detail of redmitte2x in A Nap Leads to the Future?!

Looks pretty good so far. The MC is quite lovable and I love her personality. Her reactions are also realistic and at the same time humorous. The plot is alright, finding her love ones and exacting revenge on the one who destroyed her planet. Writing: Some grammar improvements needed right there and then but nothing too immersion breaking. I highly recommend using Grammarly before publishing for easier and even better use of word choices, commas, etc. Story: Dialogues are a bit too fast but it's fine. I also highly recommend that when introducing most of the new characters, you should at most describe what he or she looks like in slight detail, meaning the clothes that he or she is wearing, his key facial features at what makes him or her unique or perhaps common, hahaha, but anyways, it's up to you dear author. Overall, I can say that it looks interesting and hope my insights will prove very helpful to you. Also, looking forward for our review swap in my story: Male Spy at an All-Girl's School. 😉