Review Detail of Mohamed_Moonwriter in rising of the demon emperor

hey guys moonwriter here the writer of rising of the demon emperor if you see any wrong things that i wrote don't be angry i just do this as a hobby so i get it wrong a lot thanks to my school i can't write new chapters so this novel will only have 8 chapters if you want more get as more votes as you can to encourage me to write more and thanks for reading my second novel my first one will get soon it's name is death god vessel