Review Detail of Schnee_ in REBIRTH IN NARUTO WORLD

First thing first is this fanfic is like a man telling story Writing Quality : you dont know whose talking who Stability : Quite good for noob writer but i want you to read it first before updating it if its readable Story Development : its all the same fanfic tend to be same as alwyas they been Character Design : OC is quite good and he doesnt reincarnated in known character World Background : the world naruto live is already been created by the original author my rating to it can only go up if you make secrete realm and orignal characters in it