Review Detail of Ezukejyll in REBIRTH IN NARUTO WORLD

Sooooooo, First thing I wanna point out here is that the Author reincarnated someone into another world, A world where EVERYTHING is based on Japanese culture. Yet the author went and give his MC the name Alex......... - Second, the grammar is horrible. Fair enough most fan-fic has terrible grammar and this also seems to be one of them. Author needs someone to point out the mistakes made so he can correct them. - There should be more to comment about however, as I was reading and got to the part where Kushina called out to both Naruto and 'Alex', then it was a instant drop for me. Also no capitalization on their names was weird to read as well.