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Writing quality is pretty disappointing. The premise is interesting and I believe that this novel certainly could be good. It’s just I can’t deal with the amount of mistakes and choppy sentence structure. I understand that your first language probably isn’t English and as such I’m still giving you a decent review. People obviously like your work so keep at it. :)

I really enjoy the idea of this book but I just couldn’t get over the grammar of it all. If that was fixed it’d be devouring this book. Top rating if fixed

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It would have been one of the good ones out there, but the writing quality is pretty much on a machine-translation level or even worse. You'd really have to keep your brain running in full capacity in order to make sense of some paragraphs, which makes this book headache-inducing.

Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The entire novel itself isn't all that bad, it is just the grammar and spelling that gets me. Overlooking that, the novel isn't too bad at all.

I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author. With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.

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The novel was very good and i was hooked on it but i am disappointed in mc character transformation. He is a serial killer with no emotion towards anyone and now he has a bottom line. In the initial chapters he was cold blooded, calculative and will do anything as long as it benefits him and later his character is being changed into a typical beta mc. i was really happy to find this book initially but now it's just another disappointing webnovel.