Good novel, the flaw is that you like to make MC act like a cringe person......act like a low key character. .. .. .. Always have to act respect to someone lower than him. .. Its a flaw in your novel. .. .and have so much chinese cultivation bullshit .. .. And rather have many power restriction. ....... Its a pity. .. No offense ..
Sinning_Sovereign
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