Review Detail of Grigo in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

to be honest I didn't think that would be so disappointed in the taste of fanfic readers but here we are. my problem is , it's badly written like really, to give you an example : Yami finished the ninja off then went to the other one killed him killed the next one ... it's bland , there's no taste to it , and the MC is supposed to be a calculating MC etc ?? well he isnt't.