Review Detail of Mavislin11 in Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)
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The school resemblance is great, but the writing quality needs a bit more of a push. The descriptions are quite a lot, sometimes you don't have be to specific. Don't tell, show applies here. Overall hoping to see more.
Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)
ExodusGaming555
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Well, thanks for the review. Sorry for the bad writing quality lol. Well, I'm still learning. Yeah maybe I get a bit overboard with the description but I just feel like I need to give that amount. Well, of course, I can reduce the description of it's really a bit too much. But I want to really make readers spin their head a little thinking and speculating the future plot or back story. Oh and also gives a tint of mystery surrounding the mc. Thx for the input and review btw. I'm honored 😀😀
Well, thanks for the review. Sorry for the bad writing quality lol. Well, I'm still learning. Yeah maybe I get a bit overboard with the description but I just feel like I need to give that amount. Well, of course, I can reduce the description of it's really a bit too much. But I want to really make readers spin their head a little thinking and speculating the future plot or back story. Oh and also gives a tint of mystery surrounding the mc. Thx for the input and review btw. I'm honored 😀😀