Review Detail of EmpRabbit in Abluvion

Ok I want to start with the fact that I really enjoyed the way you started this book. It hooked me right into the story by providing a nice perspective on things. I love apocalyptic novels and yours, although short, I really enjoyed. From my point of view, I would really have liked some more background as in more things about the world in general. Aside from a few grammar mistakes here and there, this was a good read. Great work!