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Review Detail of Your_Daddy1 in The Adventure of Rae

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Your_Daddy1
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MC dies...gets three wishes...chooses Noblesse to reincarnate into...seemed like it was going to follow the beginning of the storyline with M-21/M-24, but the author was rushing to just end it and just threw the storyline out the window. He added four arms from Ben 10 that were going to play a role later in the story, but in a rush, he decided to have them randomly attack the entire world. He has all these powers that weren't mentioned...at one point he and his blood clones turned super Saiyan 4 I think? The climax of what was supposed to be the end of the story was him fighting the strongest person from a different dimension, who sent all the four arms to attack the world. We don't know why any of this happens as it's not explained. Mc defeats bad guy blah blah blah bad guy decides to self destruct and take the earth with him/her blah blah blah mc sacrifices life to create a barrier to protect the earth blah blah blah. The author then decided to continue the story by having mc wake up in Owari no Seraph. I gave up after the first chapter of the continuation as everything prior was rushed with no explanations. Plus, he has a system that was said to have no quest function, yet the first chapter in this new world he randomly completes a quest... I'm not sure if now that the author has decided to continue the story if he's slowed down and allows things to develop in the new world. If he does, then I think there could be some good improvement.

The Adventure of Rae

Navizy

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Navizy
NavizyนักเขียนNavizy

Thank you for your Review. I will do my best to make you and the rest of the readers to enjoy and entertain this novel! P.S.: I'm just a Amateur Novelist thank you for understanding this.

HiikiNito
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Well what about releasing some new chapters?... :/

Navizy:Thank you for your Review. I will do my best to make you and the rest of the readers to enjoy and entertain this novel! P.S.: I'm just a Amateur Novelist thank you for understanding this.
Your_Daddy1
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Glad you didn't take my review poorly. I will probably check back up later, but just try not to rush and let your story and characters to develop.

Navizy:Thank you for your Review. I will do my best to make you and the rest of the readers to enjoy and entertain this novel! P.S.: I'm just a Amateur Novelist thank you for understanding this.
Navizy
NavizyนักเขียนNavizy

Yes. Thank You Very Much your advice enlightened me

Your_Daddy1:Glad you didn't take my review poorly. I will probably check back up later, but just try not to rush and let your story and characters to develop.
D1cky_101
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iam aggre with you

D1cky_101
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iam aggre with you