This is a 9.75/10. An AMAZING short story of 7chaps that is a must-read. Jumps right in, but makes the story incredibly real. Just a piece of advice for the Author, keep the story all in present tense once the background info is complete. You tend to switch a bit between present and past, and it would be an even better read if you kept it consistent. WRITE MORE!!!!!😍😍😍😍😍
Hawaktithe
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