Review Detail of MAvery in When Mechanical Heart Beats (The Story of Angela’s Lover) #MLBB

Pretty for a first time and looking forward to the next chapter. I found a few misspellings, grammatical errors, and capitalization; not story threatening but proofreading it again won't hurt. I find Dr. Joeseff's character kinda hilarious, I don't know maybe you've designed him like that, kinda villain from cartoon networks'. Oh, can't forget the X!! 😂😂 Do continue writing, not only on this story. With practice and patience, you'll be a good writer. Anyways, please check out and drop a review on my story "Bright Claw: Emergence" at 96th spot.