Review Detail of PoeticSonic in Tree of Evolution

FIRST! Don't know what happend but I want to get my ideas out there so others can point out problems sorry wise and suggestions for what to remove, replace and ideas to add. I have no idea if I am going to really write a novel because my grammar is horrible and I need to focus a lot of time just on grammar. Either way, I am already research mythology for the creatures in the new world.