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Review Detail of InnerVoice in One Piece: The Alpha Wolf

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InnerVoice
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Sorry to be a stick in the mud but if the dude was born with wolf ears and tail in the modern world, I’m sorry to say but he would in fact be dead or experimented on till death be his release. Some may try to argue with me saying how he’s unnaturally talented and smart so survival is a sure thing for our MC, but unless you tell me that he can evade capture from the world’s militias even as a baby then I suggest you shut up. 2: you said he got his training exercise and battle techniques from copying anime characters? I call that BS. I mean sure most of those moves that involves the physical body like martial arts are possible but impossible to learn. Mostly because anime characters strength are usually far beyond the limits of what a normal human can mustered. Part wolf or not, it is impossible. But then again, if he was raised by hermits within a secluded forest then it might be possible for him to survive long enough for him to be able to train his body in the ways of combat and survival. BUT THEN AGAIN!!, no matter how strong someone becomes, in the age of technology how far can our MC go before being capture or killed when the commonly use devices and gossips of the people become the eyes and ears of the governments? All in all, I just want to say that this story is flawed to the point of repulsion.

One Piece: The Alpha Wolf

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TheHaremKingz
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Damn and here I was going to actually rewrite or continue it.........😂😂😂 kinda killed my enthusiasm for continuing this novel

InnerVoice
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Sorry to hear that dude but I gotta stay true to my username. I will point out the flaws in every novel that I read, some take it as advice to improve their novel while others are offended by it. Love your novels by the way HaremKing

TheHaremKingz:Damn and here I was going to actually rewrite or continue it.........😂😂😂 kinda killed my enthusiasm for continuing this novel
InnerVoice
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I like the concept of your novels but you are Kind of all over the place. My advice to you is to just stick with the one you like the most and focus on writing to the best of your ability before moving on to a different novel. There’s no need to rush as you are the author, you are in control. Ignore all the haters out there in the comments, just let your imagination flow.

TheHaremKingz:Damn and here I was going to actually rewrite or continue it.........😂😂😂 kinda killed my enthusiasm for continuing this novel
TheHaremKingz
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I got plenty of imagination.......just have trouble keeping all my ideas to myself. I got so many ideas for different novels and whenever one pops into my head its like I HAVE to get it on paper. But yeah thanks for the encouragement and dont worry about the review. You do you bro and keep it real.

InnerVoice:I like the concept of your novels but you are Kind of all over the place. My advice to you is to just stick with the one you like the most and focus on writing to the best of your ability before moving on to a different novel. There’s no need to rush as you are the author, you are in control. Ignore all the haters out there in the comments, just let your imagination flow.