Review Detail of NeftaroWruter in H/M (Re-edited)

I read this and it seems to be pretty decent.You got the characters grow(Mostly the protagonist Quintin) and interact to their nature and desires, sense the dialogue for the most part felt natural though simple. Though i do have my gripes like the info dumps in certain parts, but those are scattered so at least they arent overwhelming. There is also the grammar and puncation errors but doesnt distract from the story. The worldbuiling is also nice yet feels incomplete, but theb again this is the first volume so ill likely see more in the seconf volume. Also like the concepts of the races of were, their types and history, cuz i was here expecting some simple werewolves adventire type of story, though i got that, the journey was different from I expected. Fascinated how you came up with this. Overall pretty good, needs improvement of course, but its decently writen and constructed. Wish you a good day writer~!!