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Interestingly, the status of the girl. Was she a peasant, noblewoman, princess, adventurer? Since an ordinary person would not have gone into the forest with the intention of returning and revenge, to become stronger. An ordinary person would not have the resources to cultivate in order to become stronger. And so intriguing, was a wise ruler ... and then he suddenly disappeared ... probably the new ruler was different, or the country itself disappeared ??? Oh ... this black ball, reminded me of the "Moving Castle of Haul" - and the fiery demon - Calcifer and Sophie Hutter. Well, remakes, borrowing ideas in the 21st century in prose is the norm. Already well-established artistic images, work better than their original, made-up, IMHO. It is interesting in the second chapter, why the owner of the store all of a sudden attacked the main heroine? It is not clear. What is the use of lotus? This is true, practice is better than theory ... but on the other hand, it is impossible without theory. Closure of the material covered in practice? Each country has its own specialization. And then went the romance ... An odd piece, the story is undoubtedly interesting. In my IMHO, the story itself is like a diamond, but it needs grinding, creating edges to turn into a diamond! The dry residue - in the novel a lot of unnecessary information, if you remove it and go to action, then the novel itself will play with new facets ... will become more vivid and attractive. It was interesting to read, thanks to the author for his work and the time spent on creating a wonderful novel. Respectfully,

Mystical Encounters

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