Review Detail of Shiksha_Jerath in Mystical Encounters

The writing quality could use some more work. I think the story could be a great work but is akin to an uncut gem. The tenses are mixed up which makes a jarring change for the reader. The character design is idyllic. I don't like everything about the character explored in one long shot so I like it that the author has kept it a bit in the grey area. This way if they want to add new things or make changes down the road, it leaves them with a lot of leeways. 😊 The background settings though explored, don't go deep enough. Not to rain on the author's parade or anything, I just like background details to be explained properly but that's just me. 😏 Overall, the author could slowly proofread and edit the chapters slowly and those minuscule problems can be solved along the way. My only advice to the author : Don't get disheartened if the response to the story is not heartening as of now, just keep on improving your weak points and the story will definitely reach the masses in time. Good luck