Review Detail of zetsubouaichan in Mystical Encounters

The story is just beginning, but I can tell that the story will turn out well later as the story continue to progress, and the characters develop. The writing flow nicely. Although there are some mistakes, it didn't bother my reading experience. The first few chapters were written in the third person pov, and later on, the author changed it to first person pov. I have to say that I preferred the third person pov since the author did not stick to just one character pov. Sometimes, it can get confusing for readers when it switched. It can be a bit dangerous as the characters' personality might sound all the same. If the author is careful about this, then, that's alright. Keep on writing!