Review Detail of Kurosis in Dragon Ball: New Life

This fan pic is great!!! I've read loads of dbf fan pics but none of them have the post picolo and pre freeze sagas. the best part? the author isn't scared to mix it up a little the MC natural changes how things pay out and is comfortable with it(still cautious enough not to be on powerful peoples radar like beers or any god for that matter). Auther love what u did with goku this version is so much better than the rest wish this version could be in the anime oh and love the length of the chapters not too long or too short right in the sweet spot =) Anyways thanks for writing this i look forward to reading more plz don't drop most dbf fan fics drop around chapter 30ish