Review Detail of Sister_comic in Sans X Reader (My first story/fanfic!)

I can really tell this is done by someone who doesn't understand what they're doing. In no way is it bad I SWEAR, it's just that keep in mind you have a long way to go. The overall story is overused and not that creative, (still not bad). I recommend you keep going, there was once a time every good writer was like this. What I do to help with my bad writing is to read a good book and see how it is written and formatted. The best thing to do right now is put in less notes within the writing (it makes it unprofesinal looking) and use "" for talking, and don't forget to describe tone I love the book and I hope you keep working Lots of love, Ash