Review Detail of Jamison_C in The Universe is Innately Just

Refreshing world building. I think it is pretty cool to have a new take on the cultivation world. It will be interesting to see how it develops in the future. There are some ****** grammar mistakes etc. I believe an editor will be able to help with your work. That said, reading through the work, it does feels as if the author has put in effort into his grammar and such. All the best!