Review Detail of Demitius in I can't use chakra

This story is messy, not the worst on the site but it could easily be cleaned up with a beta/editor. The Author has a problem with Gender pronoun identification. I can tell that English is not the Authors maiden language with how clunky the sentence structure is. This story also suffers from a bit of Mass Crossover syndrome. Having swords from 3 different anime. This could have been alleviated if he had added them at different points in the story but he gets them all at once its a little hard to read after that. The MC can somehow lift ,at 5 years old, 1200 lbs on each limb even though his body has NO CHACKRA.