Review Detail of Crow_OF_Judgement in Travelling My Favorite Worlds!

I am trying to improve, fitting name though all things considering. Also thats why she gets the Hokage, so he can tell since she cant. I mean would you believe someone came from a different world and brought up strange measurements? I sure wouldnt. Also on the fact of how the MC is right now, yes I have him acting like that on purpose, hes supposed to feel all powerful and what not I personally feel that rude awakenings feel even better after a character has so much confidence in himself. If you want to continue reading the story then thats great but if you dont I wont blame you as I personally like to take my time when I do certain things. Thank you for the review though, hopefully my response got rid of some of your worries or helped you a bit.

Aye m8. Telling he is from a different world is already very stupid and shows no sign of confidence. If it was the real naruto world they probably would have invaded his mind (he has the system here) Why wouldn't you believe strange measurements when the whole history of the world is about discovering new things. On the thing of showing his confidence, even if he has the system his news would eventually reach the hokage and (i can see you are going to write about an mc who is a patriotic person to leaf village, nothing new m8 no offense) he will tell them everything and help naruto. The way they act is very unrealistic. I can already see where your characters are derived from m8 that's why I am telling you to read some good translated novels. M8 again I am saying it, no offense but if you are really taking your time at least take him to a different world where your efforts can actually be shown instead of taking him to naruto (1000 of fanfictions already) The other reason I am telling you to read good novels is because I can see very well that your mc is derived from one of those below average harem novels about traveling to different worlds. You can take offense to my reviews or learn from it, I don't really care. Before I leave the " if someone brought of strange measurements " part was very stupid lmao. No offense again. Good Luck with your story.

Honestly I still don't see the different measurements thing stupid still but to each their own. I mean I am taking college classes and still wonder where we get the measurement wlugs from in the united States system, and if I heard a third form of measurement that wasn't from metric or imperial I probably wouldn't believe the person till there was proof it existed and they weren't spouting nonsense. Granted I am no genius, but I feel that asking for proof is reasonable. As for the rest the Naruto world, granted it's been 20 or so chapters, is only the starting point. I'm not going to spoil anything in case someone else reads this but he is going to different worlds, and I've planned out some interesting ones for the future. As for his behavior yeah I'm making him like an MC from a low leveled harem novel, I want to have him realize **** on his own and show growth as a character. So instead of being a dense blockhead that tries to have every single girl he will be an actually smart person and not someone thinking with their nether regions. Again I appreciate criticism, though I have reasons for all the above I do still take my time to think things through, and I do screw up often (Like having Minato last name being Uzimaki when his last name is namikaze is a good example.) So I do strive to grow as an author, and I promise you that I was actually thinking of an event earlier today that will help his mindset develop more. If you stop reading I don't blame you, but thank you still for taking the time to care enough to respond to me.

Wait, wait, wait. The part where you said that you wouldn’t believe “Wlug” unless there was proof, but his knowledge is hella proof just like his double sage mode. (And what type of measurement is wlug, that sounds stupid just like how cubits functioned...)

I didn't see I spelled it wrong, but I meant slugs. There is an actual measurement device for weight called slugs I kid you not, after googling it again, it's apparently equal to 32.2 pounds.

Damn, imagine a bunch of merchants selling slugs of slugs hmm that would be interesting.

Well that just grossed me out lol. Honestly forgot that slugs are a thing that exist in the animal kingdom