- A good read for readers since it's short and compact. :D - Perhaps it's just me, but it can be a bit confusing when the POV's are switched. Other than that, a well-paced story with a nice prologue for the events to come. - The characters need to have descriptions, especially Dan. Also, more detailed surroundings and backgrounds for the readers to get immersed in would be great. - Overall, a fun read where one can expect good stuff from each chapter.
Afternoone
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