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Oere
Oereนักเขียน6yrOere

Halola, Author here. Since I collected some ideas and story drafts over the time I decided to finally transform them into a novel. Be warned, I'm quite inexperienced after all, and also only treat writing as my hobby (meaning I'll mostly try to do 3-4 chapters a week, could be more or less let's see). The chapters will mostly be short too. But anyway, I'm just trying to write a story here and not win a prize :D Bear with me!

Mafia Son's System [Dropped]

Oere

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Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

Also, that Cover is still placeholder till I can come up and draw something better ._.'

TigerBlooImmortal
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Is it gonna be like hitman reborn?

Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

Hmm not quite (if we both mean the same hitman reborn).

TigerBlooImmortal:Is it gonna be like hitman reborn?
TigerBlooImmortal
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With tsuna and reborn the baby? OK but I hope he is not like suna so pacisistic

TigerBlooImmortal
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Pacifistic

Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

Dear god no, I won't let Maren become a crybaby like Tsuna XD (Though him fighting personally will have to wait for a bit, It's not easy finding appropriate foes to fight with his level :,( and just killing them outright isn't fighting in my opinion (although he will do that but still)

TigerBlooImmortal:With tsuna and reborn the baby? OK but I hope he is not like suna so pacisistic
TigerBlooImmortal
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Good

Oere:Dear god no, I won't let Maren become a crybaby like Tsuna XD (Though him fighting personally will have to wait for a bit, It's not easy finding appropriate foes to fight with his level :,( and just killing them outright isn't fighting in my opinion (although he will do that but still)
Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

Like that was the most annoying thing ever

TigerBlooImmortal:Good
TigerBlooImmortal
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Very much so

Oere:Like that was the most annoying thing ever
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15TigerBlooImmortal

What happened?

Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

I rewrote the ninth chap and reuploaded, caused the registry to kinda glitch out for some reason

TigerBlooImmortal:What happened?
Heaveah
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Is this harem?

Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

it is not

Heaveah:Is this harem?
Gyihhuhu_
Gyihhuhu_Lv10Gyihhuhu_

Maybe. But don't listen to anything the author says, because he's a pure hot blooded man, and never trust them on such *sensitive matters* kek. A no sometimes doesn't mean no and yes always means yes - rap*ist logic

Heaveah:Is this harem?
Daoisthentai
DaoisthentaiLv3Daoisthentai

Of course it is, don't lie.

Oere:it is not
Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

I swear to god it isn't harem

Daoisthentai:Of course it is, don't lie.
Daoisthentai
DaoisthentaiLv3Daoisthentai

...what'll happen to sea and nita then? Mind you, I don't like harem novels much, and even if I did read them, I don't like the harem novels where the mc has to choose between one and another heroine. Save me the future heartbreak dude, your novel is my kind of novel and I'd rather not read one where the mc has to choose between a ******** or sum ****. (btw is sea a heroine or sumthing?)

Oere:I swear to god it isn't harem
Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

ehm I guess spoiler warning: Maren isn't supposed to ever notice Sea's feelings, while Niita would develop as heroine

Daoisthentai:...what'll happen to sea and nita then? Mind you, I don't like harem novels much, and even if I did read them, I don't like the harem novels where the mc has to choose between one and another heroine. Save me the future heartbreak dude, your novel is my kind of novel and I'd rather not read one where the mc has to choose between a ******** or sum ****. (btw is sea a heroine or sumthing?)
Daoisthentai
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Ah goddammit cockblocked... At least make Sea dislikeable or she'll end up cucking your writers.

Oere:ehm I guess spoiler warning: Maren isn't supposed to ever notice Sea's feelings, while Niita would develop as heroine
Oere
OereนักเขียนOere

Oh shiiiiiteeeee

Gyihhuhu_:Maybe. But don't listen to anything the author says, because he's a pure hot blooded man, and never trust them on such *sensitive matters* kek. A no sometimes doesn't mean no and yes always means yes - rap*ist logic