Review Detail of DeJeL in I'm Sick of This World, Let's Move to Another!

*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: I feel that this story was really well done, so the only constructive criticism I could come up with is something that I feel is a small detail, but still something that stuck out to me. In the first chapter, the paragraph: "This may have taken a while to explain, but it only took a matchstick's worth of time for Jun Long's lean body to completely vanish from the face of the Earth." feels like it was a bit redundant... I feel most people would assume that it took that amount of time anyway, so saying such is unneeded... Now since that relies on assumption, I'm not saying remove it, I'm just saying take a look yourself to see if you really feel that you need it or not.;,;. Positive Feedback: I found no real issues in your writing quality (the aforementioned thing is not an issue, just something I noticed and wished to comment on). You did well on your plot concept and execution, as well as, you designed and kept to the character designs well. Also, you did a good job at doing the necessary world background thus far.;,;. Personal Feedback: I enjoyed what I have read of this novel so far, I will continue reading it in time... Please keep up the good work.;,;.