Just starting the story and I'm noticing what seems like plagiarism. There are bits that were exactly the same as the first chapter of Ninja Gamer By: DragonKnightRyu. I'm guessing the author isn't the same person because English doesn't seem like their first language. I'm guessing this is Jugo's clan. There's no way that a clan like this would just be farmers, until they're wiped out, if they live in the Naruto world. Maybe if it specifically mention that they're peace loving. I don't really like the level up stat gains from his clan because they don't make sense. It feels like the author is trying to balance the world by giving them, and presumably every ninja clan, only 6 stat gains. Real life doesn't need to be balanced. The Uchiha clan shouldn't get the same gains as the Yamanaka clan. They're superior. This Kigen no chie clan should be getting a lot of vitality stats if the natural energy is increasing their lifespans and such. The death scene didn't make sense to me. How do you tackle someone and jump out of a train? Did he go through a window? Did he overpower him and drag him towards a door? How did he do all of this without the guy blowing himself up? Why would you hijack a carriage of a train if you're a suicide bomber instead of just blowing yourself up? If you're a suicide bomber you would probably act immediately unless you also have another weapon and are trying to cause more damage.
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