Review Detail of Zinion in Tear a Path
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A good novel,I like the world and so far the mc is interesting enough. Recommend to anyone that likes apocalypse game type worlds. A few things that bother me it's his stats... by doing NA it kind of feels like you have just given up bothering to calculate his growth it also makes it hard for me to determine how much hes grown in a set point more so when months are skipped in the novel. Also stats are important hes not got anything else but the ability to raise his stats with out limitation by either training or eating monsters but if we cant see them then who fucking knows. I hope this is a momentary thing and we will start to see his stats again in the future. Next is the world granted its early days but I feel like your rushing describing the environment and skipping bits which makes things a little confusing, all I can suggest is to slow it down explain things in more detail as so far I am liking this novel but yeah if you keep skipping description or doing them half arsed then things are gonna get a lot more confusing on the future. Keep up the good work and cant wait to read more
Tear a Path
bcrow
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Thanks, I’m so happy to hear from you!! I always like to know that people enjoyed the story. As for the stats area I could give out the stats that he currently holds, but I have to tell you that it won’t be as satisfying later on. A lot of things are in the works for reveal and there’s a lot to explore. Additionally, for now, the focus is towards the world itself as it pans out as well as him finding his stride in this world, that’s why there’s a lot of confusion with the things he’s doing because he essentially doesn’t know it himself. I think that if the stats show, like any gameplayer, he’d just spam on hunting and drinking blood to maximize his passive. But that limits his path of growth, I don’t want to make him a guy that’s only dependent towards his given skills, like his cooking skills aren’t part of the system itself, its something that he learned but helps him survive anyway, and neither are his observational skills. I hope that when the time comes that I can blow your mind with the reveals. And I have to say I am sorry for rushing through the environment descriptions, it’s that I have a lot in the works for future development, I may have rushed the writing to get there making the chapters in between a little less descriptive. I’ll try to work on that. Thank you so much for your input. Just for that I’ll release 3 chaps today
His stats are shown again in the latest chapter, but like the author himself said... The story is not purely about growth, it's about a man in his journey of finding his place in a 'wilderness' far greater than he had ever imagined. He is a man who rightly should've died multiple times already, but through luck, ingenuity, and heart: survives.
bcrow:Thanks, I’m so happy to hear from you!! I always like to know that people enjoyed the story. As for the stats area I could give out the stats that he currently holds, but I have to tell you that it won’t be as satisfying later on. A lot of things are in the works for reveal and there’s a lot to explore. Additionally, for now, the focus is towards the world itself as it pans out as well as him finding his stride in this world, that’s why there’s a lot of confusion with the things he’s doing because he essentially doesn’t know it himself. I think that if the stats show, like any gameplayer, he’d just spam on hunting and drinking blood to maximize his passive. But that limits his path of growth, I don’t want to make him a guy that’s only dependent towards his given skills, like his cooking skills aren’t part of the system itself, its something that he learned but helps him survive anyway, and neither are his observational skills. I hope that when the time comes that I can blow your mind with the reveals. And I have to say I am sorry for rushing through the environment descriptions, it’s that I have a lot in the works for future development, I may have rushed the writing to get there making the chapters in between a little less descriptive. I’ll try to work on that. Thank you so much for your input. Just for that I’ll release 3 chaps today
Hey man, yeah I’m working on it, just that my cover designing skills aren’t up to par yet, sorry for missing chapters, I felt this arc wasn’t up to par for quality so spent yesterday trying to edit
GRoy:think about changing the cover. a lot of ppl are complaining about it.