Review Detail of IcyPyromaniac in Potion Maker
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This review is partly because of me personally not liking his "enemy" surviving airborne poison with the excuse that he was under a pile of bodies, which wouldn't be possible because he would die along with everybody else unless they all piled of top of the boy when the poison was released. Plus setting up a main rival cheapens the plot a bit and finally this novel is about potions and yet after having the ingredients to make a potion that would make him more powerful it's takes 12 chapters for it to happen. Also the powerful girl trapped/sleeping/hurt is way too overused.
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HeavenShakingPalm9
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She wasn't trapped, sleeping, or hurt. She picked him up when he passed out from the rock, also, when I was typing the chapter with the poison, I was thinking that the gas didn't touch the ground, and that it was a couple feet from it. Elizabeth survived and she was on the ground. And his "enemy" is actually the whole world. Arnold is there for the demon..
I was talking about the whole daughter of the creator of the universe thing, and also the kid was chasing him with the adults he would probably be standing up and would also not probably be a few feet tall. I'm just confused due to there being no clarification of why he lived (there might have been and I missed it) but anyway it's a good novel just not my cup of tea so I'm biased, other people love it so keep up the good work.
I don't remember seeing the powerful girl trapped in any xianxia or xuanhuan novels I have read, at least not that many. I have read a lot of xianxia's and xuanhuan novels, unless I am not reading the right ones? It's okay it isn't your cup of tea, I don't expect everyone to like my novel, although it would be nice though.
IcyPyromaniac:I was talking about the whole daughter of the creator of the universe thing, and also the kid was chasing him with the adults he would probably be standing up and would also not probably be a few feet tall. I'm just confused due to there being no clarification of why he lived (there might have been and I missed it) but anyway it's a good novel just not my cup of tea so I'm biased, other people love it so keep up the good work.
So you've never read against the gods? I can't name the others but they normally involve a powerful woman getting injured so the mc helps then etc. It's not that common but it's in quite a few popular novels with harems which are usually bad because only a few people can pull it off well.
HeavenShakingPalm9:I don't remember seeing the powerful girl trapped in any xianxia or xuanhuan novels I have read, at least not that many. I have read a lot of xianxia's and xuanhuan novels, unless I am not reading the right ones? It's okay it isn't your cup of tea, I don't expect everyone to like my novel, although it would be nice though.
IcyPyromaniac:So you've never read against the gods? I can't name the others but they normally involve a powerful woman getting injured so the mc helps then etc. It's not that common but it's in quite a few popular novels with harems which are usually bad because only a few people can pull it off well.