Review Detail of DeJeL in Author Vs Protagonist

To start with, constructive criticism; There are multiple points that if read exactly as written, seem to be confusing due to punctuation. I see some places whereas there seems to be a lack of a comma, and (though rarely) some places whereas the comma is places where it shouldn't be. Other than that (which is only a small detail in my mind, just wanted to point it out since I wish to give criticism in all my reviews if I can think of even the slightest bit of it.;,;.) I enjoyed getting to understand this story batter. It looks like it will be a good read for those who are into great humor and completely OP character for reasons none other than "God deems it that way" (or the Author in this case). Sadly that is not my forte, so dropped for me, but don't let that stop you from writing. Keep up the good work.;,;.