It was confusing because you named the ability to create potions Alchemy instead of Potioneering which made the advancement confusing since instead of a class advancement it was an advancement in Potioneering

It's always disappointing when we have an MC who decides he wants to be a Devil and become a slave, even if Rias is a good master, when he has no advantages and only disadvantages. As an alchemist he could have easily achieved the same benefits as a hired mage and eventually even become a hired mage for one of the Satans or join a faction that has alchemists who can teach the MC more.

I ended up coming across your review again and realized that I know why Chinese fics love Hermione. She's basically the perfect daughter for the Chinese. A genius years ahead of the neighbor's children, who is super successful, joins politics and will bring glory and money to the family (she becomes minister of magic)

I'd rather cry about your existence

I'm sure there are several ways to justify her choice and several reasons why you decided on these powers, but as I mentioned in other comments, this is where the roulette should comes in because having the MC wasting wishes really bothers readers.

And the spear is helping him, if the spear is enough to take the system to another world, it should instead remove his weakness.

I don't remember the details, but I can summarize them. The same spider that bit Peter also bit someone else on the same day (I think it was another student on the field trip), a woman who became Silk. But as a side effect, the two have an insane attraction for each other, you can think of it as hentai pheromones that make the two fall in love and have lust for each other. That's all I know. If you want more details I recommend searching on Google.

It's simply not possible through true magic that has been used before. The most he could do is use it to energize another method of reaching the Root.

Not really, the goal of reaching the Root is to reach the Akashic records and obtain all knowledge. The confusing part is which comes first, the real magic or getting to the root. My theory is that the users of true magic are those who reached Root and returned, there must be some Magus who reached Root but decided not to return or died due to counterforce.

Kinda annoying how Big Sapb always does everything for the MC, but I understand that the MC is a Noob.

It's a Nodachi!!!!

In medaka box we have All Fiction and it didn't even take a year for her to get it. In Dragon Ball we have Zeno. Anos Voldigoad can annihilate universes, Simon Tosses Entire Galaxies Like They're Nothing and can annihilate all reality, If we look at magical girls we have Usagi and Madokami, Amano Yukitero became omnipotent and omnicient after winning a Battle Royale that lasted a few days. These are the ones I remember off the top of my head now without needing to search. Animes and manga have characters as strong as final level xianxia, ​​the difference is that while most xianxia characters need to strive for millions of years, most Japanese characters at this level usually achieve this type of power with relative ease and even the slower ones usually take at most a few decades.

But they are final level characters who took millions of years to reach that level. I can look at Marvel and DC and point to characters at the same level who were born that way or took something like a decade to reach that level. Xianxia is actually surprisingly fair in power scaling as the characters really need to work for it, everyone can become strong, but they are still limited by the resources available.

Bro, did you even read the Novel? She constantly has to overcome challenges due to being weak and lacking talent. In fact, a problem with this fic is how at the beginning the protagonist is stepped on by everything and everyone (fortunately this improves).

This is because the story skipped the standard beginning in a noob sect and went straight to a final level sect. Obviously the external disciples of a final level sect are at the level of an elder of the noob sects.

Thx for the chapter!

It started out interesting, but as soon as the MC stepped into Hogwarts the story was taken away by the great revelation of the MC's past to everyone and everything. It immediately stopped being a story about an exorbitant detective and became a Chinese fic about the perfect MC flexing how amazing he is.

Well, I fell in love and had my first relationship at 9 so I don't think it's strange, but at that age relationships are not sexual, they are more affectionate with some loving kisses and hugs but without sexual desire involved.

Just let it be, it's a fanfic. Honestly, instead of changing the story simply choose another one to translate if you don't like it.

I started reading it with suspicion because it was a translated fic, but the translation is good and the story is interesting. It's a good read and I totally recommend it, however I have to admit that it doesn't seem like the type of story that is successful in the web novel. I recommend posting on QQ or SB.