Arnold_Park_Caul

Even though it's a First Draft of your story of this ongoing chapters, it's still a pretty engaging read. The writing of the characters and the conversations are interesting and feels more character driven with a small plot wrapped. I am intrigued where the story will go and how it will end. I am imagining them as the details you mentioned because still it's a first draft and needs time to polish and the world a lot more. Still, as first draft goes. It has potential.