nobodyhereknowsme2

Saw your comments. I agree with you the first 30 or so chapters are pretty rough. If you feel like you want to give it a second chance skip to around chapter 30. More substance there and it's not just match after match after match

I do see Mason as the more mature professional type compared to Callum.

Thanks for catching that. Chapter 120 has been updated.

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They come to me as I write.

I usually look for everyday moments when the 'professional athlete' mask comes off. At the academy, he needs to be this serious 'hammer.' When he interacts with people like Mia or Mr. Davies, it makes him slow down and be a teenager again. I think those small moments, like struggling to buy groceries or playing in the garden, show that while his body is changing, his heart remains in the same place.