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Ramesht_1263

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  • Ramesht_1263
    Ramesht_12637d ago
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    hell yeah 👍 do it , do it 😁😁😁😁😁

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    Ramesht_126311d ago
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    is this a translation???? if yes the tell me its raw name , by the way the story is quite interesting. if you are the author then best of luck 👍

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    Ramesht_126321d ago
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    this is one of quite interesting idea for super gene if you are able to execute this properly it would be quite famous ☺️ ☺️☺️ best of luck

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    Ramesht_126323d ago
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    tell me its raw name ...........raw raw raw name

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    Ramesht_12634 months ago
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    would tsunade will be in his harem

  • Ramesht_1263
    Ramesht_12634 months ago
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    *so we have a guy with three merge personality but you have only shown a copy of gojo *what would be his goal in his new life for example ,::1) building a harem and concurring world or 2) developing his power to new level like training, studying,exploring something like that of cultivation novels make him a multiversal level being he would be able to travel to defferent universe using infinity and yamato and even get out of the forth wall or 3) something of a hero type where since he is a mutant he may strive to become someone who makes mutant race accepted by humans or 4) some type of capatalyst where he starts his company make his name becomes famous etc *and saturo also has yamato so you can show him developing it's abilities to cut dimensions etc imagine it yous self (I am just giving ideas) *and about love intrest since this guy is quite powerful you should pair him with some gal who is of his level like wanda of mcu (cause she is quite pitiful and emotional also who does not likes elizabeth olsen) not the one you wrote in ch 3 *this story has quite a lot of potential and i have lots of idea's that I can not write but i will support you work

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    Ramesht_12634 months ago
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    well this novel is very interesting.....but is it a translation or original

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    Ramesht_12634 months ago
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    good 👍 one of the best marvel novel I have read so far ........but please maintain update stability

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    Ramesht_12634 months ago
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    I. have read many marvel fanfics ,this one is quite realistic .Mc is smart and likeable . evolution through science.i love these type of novel's (for marvel that is ) let me make some suggestions: •I hope that you will make mc earn each and every ounce of his powers ( like let him develop some drug that make his brain power more powerful ) •and also don't go making him all so powerful, overpowered god suddenly so that with one punch he kills all the heroes and villains let him gain power slowly (like first he tries to make spider serum but only succeeds with basic power ie nerfed spide cause of sider totem ) •i request you not to diversify him like do not make him horde power from every superhero let him succeed in replicating one certain growth type superpower (like Chaos magic, let's say he tries to make a machine that connects and joins him to another dimension) because this is one of the powerful superpower in marvel you can let him develop it step by step with every battle.and every action •also since he is an extra how will he deal with tva and ancient one or you could say that his time line is not the sacred one but of loki timeline after that time tree is formed so he is free to make ripples •also since you have romance in here how about wanda,gwen and mc . let's say you make him get kidnapped by hydra due to some beef with norman and then they experiment on him he gets. some demention linking power and connect with the same dimension from where wanda gets her power and then boom 💥 we get a growth type versatile superpower with some character development ( i love it ,you lone it readers love it ) •well I have many ideas but I really appreciate this novel one of the best in logic and scaling •and I request please write some romance chapter btw mc and wanda (ya I agree I am a sucker for wanda )🥺🥺