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aren't toddler ranged from 1 - 5? since there's no preschooler, i thought it's correct... well, cmiiw? lol
i'm not making the story follow a linear path, it can be future or past then vice versa...
right? however, they differs in usage are being too much, don't you think? the current structures on Touki being able to be used for saint ranked and above are being too strict and even it's ability to create several different powered attacks and body enhancements are falling to Ki usages more than mana... the excalibur looks more like kamehameha than a magic...
i appreciate the review, but this is a slowburn fantasy, i've tried to make it action packed but it's not consistent with how Mushoku tensei story developed and not really something i aim for in how a story progressing, Thanks for the review anyway! you can expect faster development after mana calamity and his return from the nightmare dungeon though
good catch, fixed them
noted
i'll try to do at least 2 a week for other platform aside from my site for now
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