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It doesnt make sense for him to not have ANY memories of the body, and still be getting away with it. People are dubious of him then just shrug their shoulders. Unless the previous owner of the body was already pretty aloof, flip-floppy, and didnt have a set in stone personality; him acting out in strange ways and not having answers he should know, should ring alarm bells in these characters heads. It wouldve made more sense if he just assimilated the previous ones memories, then slowly changed the way people perceived him.

Do you know what NTR is? NTR goes both ways Netorare for being stolen from, and Netori for stealing. He immediately continues the old body's cheating, so he is allowing Claire to be NTR'd. You made a role-reversed world and literally put him in the position of the female, so Nancy is NTR'ing Claire. I dont care about it being NTR, im just explaining it.

Why would i "read it well up" if you just posted a meme that you didn't even read the feedback provided, makes it seem like the story won't get better when you don't even read comments posted.

Its okay. Its not terrible or amazing. Theres not really any building of the interpersonal relations with our mc and the girl. The way the system was really active in the first few chapter was annoying, but then the mc just starts ignoring notifications. The amount their "affection" goes up is inconsistent, and its doesnt even really matter so far because their "outbursts" come and go pretty quickly. If he really wanted to not die and change the story, he couldve tried WAYYYY harder to avoid them, but he goes "Welp, i tired, guess ill keep talking to them and be their friend". Our mc meeting up and befriending the OG mc is the smartest move for his survival, but he didnt even initiate that it was liam that did... The story moves pretty slow overall and has repetitive "filler" that we dont need imo, but i think it has good bones and could be good. Also the doubling up on names is kinda annoying, 2 Adrian 2 Devon 2 Elana, you just go "From house blabla" and call it a day a little more effort would be nice. Then you need to run it through spell check before publishing or whatever its called "you u" and "stree" instead of "stress" are just two off the top of my head.

Wow been awhile since i read this; But I dont think so, since he seems genuinely lost most of the time and is kinda making up his objectives on fly, if it was the "Old Kael" he should have a plan already cooked up and ready to go, But it seems Elysia doesnt change at all, Kael is still slow, lost, and dense and the author will just keep it that way. Either way from other comments it looks like theres not much going on after i stopped and picking this back up is not on my to-do list.

Thrust is for the once, "Thrusted" would be repeatedly over and over, which he's not be repeatedly thrust into this world.

Why start 2 more books if you havent finished Scumbag System, would it be better to focus on that. Also why delete Demon Seer, then devote time to more books?

The flashbacks, scene changes and pov swaps need a header or some kind of indicator that a change happened. Just fully take out his "Alternate" paths because they have no reason and are just bloat, dont make me read extra chapters just for it not to even happen, it makes it seem like you just want to prolong the story for no reason.

I don't know how your going to reach those goals you set instead of synopsis, how are you supposed to pull readers in when most avoid because they are given no details.

This has to be translated. The flow of sentences is off. The quotations are never in the right places. I can't tell what's in his head or says out loud without re-reading. There isnt even a backstory, we are just trown into the story with bad english.