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Would like more interaction between ML and FL. More with other characters such as Generals and support characters etc. Great idea but poor use of the idea. All you get so far is a lot of money spent, a lot of groveling, a lot of shopping lists. The use of modern machines seems hard to hide to me. I would think an army would come just to steal the trucks etc. More thought to what you would really be able to use and keep running in such an environment. Green house would be more sustainable than diesel fuel vehicles. Artic weather coming and you are looking to transport millions of tons of coal?
Mostly a long shopping list again and again. Needs to flesh out about the people, family, etc. Tired of what antique sells for what and how many tons of rice etc. Good idea for book but falls short of what it could be.