Little_Dragons

Mc be like:

NAAAAAANIIIIIIII! this is sick dude! As hell!

Bro all your mc have no parents why?

I'm still a virgin too

Interesting

This novel has a great idea but needs some work. Some parts aren't explained well. The writing is good in places, but not always consistent. To improve, focus on making the story clearer. But you know the story shows promise. With some revisions, it could be really good👍.

Weird but ok