NarrowVictory

The first chapter is interesting, and Ethan’s story is off to a good start. His new life and emotions are well shown, but the scenes with his mother felt strange for a first chapter. A better warning or a slower build-up to these themes might help. Overall, I’m curious to see what happens next!

this chapter reminded me jobless reincarnation lol good one

this reminded me of an idiot i know well.

finally a gothic fl <3

sounds like another hogwards

Ok, it is as inspiring as it is thrilling. His journey to become an immortal god and tamer will tug at your heartstrings and spark your own dreams of greatness. An interesting and sometimes funny story.