Chloe_lara

You are a great author, and I must praise your ability to design the characters of the story and describe the situation so beautifully with your words. Reading your story makes me feel very good, and I hope you complete this story soon and that it has a happy ending. :)

The story and plot are becoming really good as we move forward. As a reader, I usually don't like stories that progress too quickly, but there is something different about your story. The more we move forward, the more interesting and enjoyable it becomes. I have just posted Chapter 4 and am going to read it now.