shamam0506

When i read the first chapter I thought that it had a nice setup, chapters 2-4 was okay and boom and it got a really bad transition from one thing to another... maybe it's readable? I know I wont read it with the way it's right now, good luck

There weren't many times but since it felt like it had some when I read it so it means there is something to it, the writing is good but for some sentence it seems like the words get scrambled while words are missing so the sentence is not complete, aside for that it seems like i will enjoy this and thanks for the answer, keep up the good work

There are some weird problems with the writing and i have no idea what the chapter release schedule is so it seems low but if that gets fixed i would have ranked it about 4.2 so yea, you should give it a try. And any information when you plan on posting new ch mister author?

Really nice and fun read but i feel like there was the part when he charged back home on nix it felt very rushed so i hope it wont be like that often but worth a read in my opinion

Its good, you should give it a try, it's interesting so far (ch 10) and nothing feels off, only the fact that the blink was a symbol for someone and this wasn't explained but I guess it's because we still don't have enough chapters yet

i wont say that it's a ripoff since this is a genre where its all the same more or less, BUT it feels like a ripoff something, (and something that is pretty new), since it's only 14 ch in so maybe it will have identity of its own soon. Regardless of that its well written and can be worth to take a look. (please don't take to heart author, i just try to give my impression so far, so keep up with the good job)

did she just kill him? this school is wild

I do get it and I found it good, just telling to future readers that they should first get over the first chaps before feeling like its not for them because its a little bit confusing. (like how you wrote yourself that kelvin isn't the MC). Anyway good job and i am waiting for next chap, + i see you changed the cover?

To me it feels weird... it's not bad but it didn't hook me in to much (ch 16), I find the story unique but that's it for me, you can give it a try you wont miss to much if you won't. But who knows, for now i will keep reading since i do believe it can be interesting.

thanks for the chap