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I dropped it here. I was still reading on despite disgusted by goblin slayer setting/world background but now i can't continue. I hate it when mc loss memory. Without memory he is not the same person just someone with same personality(depends on plot)

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Bro this is just a translation of Russian fanfic.

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2⭐ good idea but AI trash 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

What???

Also that obvious cliff-hanger is kinda bad(I'm not saying cliffhangers r bad no they the most important to make readers invested but a obvious cliff hanger which is purposely hidden just feels annoying, feels like author is treating us like a idiot not to mention u have use that cliffhanger twice. Cliffhangers should feel natural while reading not like this.

I know u want to show reaction but why show pov of some npc bch? Their no emotional bond or investment why do we even care Not to mention most readers generally don't care or interested about characters other than mc(only time they care is when they have some relation with mc and the topic is somewhat related to mc). As for reaction of internet and government(or if in the future u use reaction/pov of main characters of popular fiction or public reaction etc) those are great 👍 because people r generally interested on their reactions and POVs and they want to see effects and consequences on the world by what mc has done previously.

Okay i can't continue anymore because of ai. Everything felt natural if i conciously ignore few things but when characters starts talking in that annoying tone i know it's an AI. No one talk like that except chatgpt or people in YouTube/tiktok who use chatgpt for scripts.