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Name keeps changing. It went from Ellen to Allen, to Alan. It's confusing to readers every time it changes. Ellen is a first/individual name mainly for women/girls but can be a Family/Last Name for anyone. Allen & Alan can also be Last Names/Family Names but if the first/individual & Last/Family names keep changing, it becomes difficult to follow the story.

A child is not a tool for subduing the other parent of the child you share. Children are human beings whom have feelings of their own. Parents are meant to protect their children. She is doing her duty to protect Jason while *he* is the threat.

If this ML (Male Lead) continues in this manner, & FL (Female Lead) & Jason are not able to escape, I will be forced to drop this. It's making me extremely angry due to ML's toxicity.

his not her.

The Chesters or Chester Family

They

Is this supposed to be here as the start of a new sentence ending this chapter; or, is it supposed to be the start of the next chapter?

"care fore them" or "take care of them"?

Daniel's

his or Annabelle's step-mother?